I think it turned out great. Your coloring is getting a lot better.

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Agree, your coloring has gotten a lot better--like over the course of a year, the use of depth and consistency.
I really like what you've done with this, I love it, and I love how dark it is, you've done something with the mood and the atmosphere I didn't expect, but that's a great thing.
Imagining this in a scene is actually very inspirational, and I think though her expression was very set in the way I drew it, the atmosphere adds to it, and changes it slightly, if you can understand what I'm trying to say :0
I love the outfit, the pinstripes and dark palette colors are very fitting on her, and I'm glad you did the patch red because of the black outfit, it looks very uniform.
The shading and lighting are excellent, it draws your eye to the folds on the clothing, and her hair.
The textures on her hair make them really look like dreads, the dull lighting and harsh shading work great.
And I know I've gone on about the coloring, but lastly, the flesh coloring, and the shading style on it, stands out to me in showing of your progression; the way the lighting begins again at the end of the shading angle.
Very nice to see this colored so well!
I wasn't expecting it so soon either.
Thanks!

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